Starting With the Basics

In this news article, it involves two Ontario men who were sentenced 20 and 22 years in prison respectively on Thursday after prosecutors had called for life terms for their role bringing nearly 2,500 kilos of cocaine into Ontario in 2013. They are Vito Buffone of Caledone and Jeffery Kompon of Welland. Their sentence comes amid as a “large scale drug investigation” targeting cartel members in southern Ontario, Niagara Regional Police spokesman Phil Gavin told VICE News on Friday. I found that this article was very simple to read and that the lead got straight to the point. this article informed us of the most important details in the beginning and also towards the end. In this article Phil Gavin told VICE News on Friday, The sentencing comes amid a “large scale drug investigation” targeting cartel members in southern Ontario. I found that this article doesn't have a great ending because it just cuts off after telling what the drug smugglers were sentenced with.
https://news.vice.com/story/ontario-men-sentenced-for-importing-coke-amid-crackdown-on-sinaloa-cartel 

In this article, it involves A 29-year-old Quebec man who was sentenced to nine years in prison on Friday after he was found guilty of attempting to join Islamic State militants abroad in Syria. Ismael Habib was the first adult in Canada to be convicted at trial for travelling abroad to participate in terrorism, an offence that was added to the criminal code in 2013. A Quebec Court gave Habib eight years for attempting to leave Canada to fight with an extremist group. He also gave him one year for providing false information in order to obtain a passport. Yes, the lead was effective because they got their point across and made it very easy to understand. Majority of the information was told in the middle of the article. it stated most of the information I mentioned above. Habib says he wants to leave Canada to live out his religious beliefs and desire to join ISIS. yes, the article has a good ending. it closes off with some good facts and doesn't leave us on a cliff hanger.
https://news.vice.com/story/quebec-man-sentenced-to-nine-years-in-prison-for-attempting-to-join-isis